So I'm struggling with this and I thought I'd toss it out there for y'all to answer. I'm obsessing over something and I can't seem to get my mind wrapped around it.
How do you use conversation and scenes to move the plot forward? I thought I was doing that . . . but I guess not. :-D
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Linda, since I haven't seen your work, I can't comment. Is your critiquer/editor saying, "What does this have to do with anything??" Is your work posted online somewhere, or would you like me to look at it? Send me a message if you do, and I'll give you a email address to send a file to.
Sherri
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